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Tarnished by ~Slowlydying:iconSlowlydying:

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Tonight
Be my scar,
my hollowed-out wound that bleeds
and bleeds
and fails to heal for days long after it was d
                                                                           u
                                                                           g
This insipid fucking disease,                    
my profane belligerence
My silver reminder, as thin as paper,
and sharp as glass
This stainless steel has tarnished,
singed my skin
and flirted with my winding veins
Does
it
hurt?
To feel what I've been feeling
for so long
(I've so long been gone)
The annihilation of sanitation
is within reach
Pull this wretched,
deleterious sin from the depths of my blood
It belongs
You will never find my soul!
©2007-2009 ~Slowlydying
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Is this what happens when I listen to Slipknot?

I can't stand to see
Your thalidomide robot face!
-From Left Behind by Slipknot
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~Disastercake:iconDisastercake: Dec 24, 2007, 10:38:03 PM
you should listen to them more often then :clap:

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~Allie :frail:

Poetry is best when written in fits of raw emotion and near insanity. -Self

:crazy:
~Slowlydying:iconSlowlydying: Dec 24, 2007, 10:40:13 PM
Haha, thanks. I do listen to them quite often though. :P

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:music: And the music industry mafia is pimping girl power, sniping off sharp-shooter singles from their styrofoam towers. :music: -Ani DiFranco
~Disastercake:iconDisastercake: Dec 24, 2007, 11:28:11 PM
i like the formatting

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~Allie :frail:

Poetry is best when written in fits of raw emotion and near insanity. -Self

:crazy:
~Slowlydying:iconSlowlydying: Dec 24, 2007, 11:29:35 PM
Thanks. :)

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:music: And the music industry mafia is pimping girl power, sniping off sharp-shooter singles from their styrofoam towers. :music: -Ani DiFranco
~morbidpoet15:iconmorbidpoet15: Dec 25, 2007, 2:07:35 PM
Lovely poem.

Fave Line:
The annihilation of sanitation

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"Look, it's been swell, but the swellings gone down"
~Slowlydying:iconSlowlydying: Dec 25, 2007, 6:49:43 PM
Lol why thank you. A bit more morbid than my other stuff. :P I think that's my fave line too!

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:music: And the music industry mafia is pimping girl power, sniping off sharp-shooter singles from their styrofoam towers. :music: -Ani DiFranco
~morbidpoet15:iconmorbidpoet15: Dec 26, 2007, 12:19:55 AM
Hehe, great minds think alike.

lol I first typed that "Great minds think along"

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"Look, it's been swell, but the swellings gone down"
~Slowlydying:iconSlowlydying: Dec 26, 2007, 12:22:04 AM
:nod: It's a well known fact that all great minds think along. I know I do...

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:music: And the music industry mafia is pimping girl power, sniping off sharp-shooter singles from their styrofoam towers. :music: -Ani DiFranco
~RenegadePineapple:iconRenegadePineapple: Mar 1, 2009, 2:26:48 PM
Humm, I get the impression that your "silver reminder" is a ring of some sort...?

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Don't ASSUME...
you'll make an ASS out of U and ME!
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