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We spend our evenings
getting to know each other's
bodies: outlines, inside.
Minty lips, I want
to map you out,
write you down.
I'll take all detours,
headed South.
Press yourself against me.

It doesn't have to be forever,
but I can love you.
And I can tell you
you're beautiful
and hope you'll believe me.

We spend our evenings
lying around,
exchanging smiles.
For now, it's everything.  
©2009 ~Slowlydying
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Absoulutely stellar. I like the line "Minty lips, I want" best.

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:iconselfmadequeen:
Wow. This is amazing, beautifully written. :heart:

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Thank you very much. I'm glad you think so. :)

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Thank you. :D

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Coolest f-word ever deserves a fucking shout! I mean, why can't all decent men and women call themselves feminists out of respect for those who fought for this? -Ani DiFranco
:iconsophie447:
reminds me of my girlfriend.. i miss her now :(

i really like the second paragraph

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:iconslowlydying:
I'm sorry. :hug:
And thank you. :)

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:iconsoulpaste:
The last stanza brings back alot of memories...

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Good ones, hopefully. :)

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Coolest f-word ever deserves a fucking shout! I mean, why can't all decent men and women call themselves feminists out of respect for those who fought for this? -Ani DiFranco
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Very beautiful. It sings of soft romance and tenderness. I really enjoyed it.

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