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Cold Metal

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Cold metal dragged across her skin brings relief from all those bad days
Her feelings have become too overwhelming
She doesn't care about much anymore-
Except for that cold metal pushed into her skin,
That relief it brings
And her heart starts pounding,
And she feels a rush
She really can't stop
And she really doesn't want to
Because that cold metal has become her life
And her life seems hardly worth living
You swear you don't feel anything
but you feel the blade in your wrist, don't you?
You long for the final effect, don't you?
You know that you love it.
You know that you're sick, don't you?
But haven't stopped, have you?
Not really. You envision it.
You see your suicide, don't you?
Never fades far from your mind, right?
-Written by V about V

A poem for a poem
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aqullion's avatar
It is good rytm , and nice tone into it